.// Beta-Checking (ongoing)

[iprince]

Yeah, triple bullets. They are on purpose.

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
last paragraph, renown should be renowned
last paragraph, depicts should be depiction
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/art_immortality.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
throughout, three different formats used for numbers. 84948665.353, 500 000 00 (missing a 0?), 3,000,000
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/astro_planet.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
2nd par-, durably should be durable
3rd par-, involved should be involves
3rd par-, required should be requires
under novice guide, anthromorphic should be anthropomorphic

Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/culture_searchercloth.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
1st sentence. . . I dunno it seems awkward?
1st par-, offenses should be offense

Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/culture_cowardchallenge.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
last par-, contracted should be contracting

Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/di_bruising.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
2nd par-, "sets in at the point" the should be this
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/di_burardbi.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
2nd last par-, vaccinated should be vaccinate
2nd last par-, approach should be approaching
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/di_scratch.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
1st par-, "It is appears" should be it appears
1st par-, feel should be feels
under pigeon-dust, side-affect should be side-effect

Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/drug_illegal.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
under habitat, "It is, never-the-less, extremely and should be avoided. " is incomplete
under behaviour, lathing should be bathing or lazing?
under diet (2nd par-), by should be but
under reproduction (1st par-), [ i ][ /i ] is used instead of <i></i>

Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/fauna_heartstealer.html

[Spiderfly]

Name: Spiderfly
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdspiderfly&action=display&thread=1487

Error:
1st par-, 3rd sentence, incomplete?
under vanra, "When struck upon, the vanra creates booming drum sound" should be creates a booming
under rithn, you have rithin at one point
under frix, And individual should be An individual
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/Izarn/rec_instrument.html

[Kitty Love]

Name: Kitty

Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cdkitty&action=display&thread=1507

Error:
Under the Miscellaneous section, the lower case 'o' is missing for what I assume would be retractable claws. Caught this while musing over Zi's genetics.
Page URL: www.planetzar.com/lc-genes


FIXED!
Go ahead and add the PP to your records! C:

[iprince]

All edits up to this point are complete[/u]

Spiderfly: Your PP total from this batch should be 24.

Laving was actually the word I was looking for, for the heartstealer. I just did a quick google check to figure it out. "Lathing" was actually a word, so it didn't come up as mispelled in MSword, but...yes. Not the one I was looking for. Whoops!

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under Zealot, "Reds are purples" should be "Reds and purples"
Page Url: www.planetzar.com/lc-type-a

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: Thread Here

Error: Under Naming, "ao is allowed, by aoo is not" should be "but" instead of "by"
Page Url: www.planetzar.com/prov-balada.html