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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Show Disturblings", 3rd par- "preform" should be "perform"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Statistics", 3rd par- "levelling" should be "leveling"
Under "Gaining Stat Points", #2, "moderater" should be "moderator"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under Fähigkeit, header is missing the "k"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Master Smith Talents", Expert, "This effects lasts" should be "This effect lasts"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Balada", 1st par- "travellers" should be "travelers"
Under "Eneis", 1st par- "traveller" should be "traveler"
Under "Sultherem", 1st par- "aboreal" should be "arboreal"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Lower-Middle", "Rowhouse", "storeys" should be "stories"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Shops Can", both instances of "jewellery" need to be "jewelry"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Government", 3rd par- "instil" should be "instill"
Under "Art", 3rd par- "The only exception are" should be "exceptions"
Heading "Ettiquette" should be "Etiquette"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "The Shopping District", "abustle" should be "bustling"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Clothing and Decoration", 1st par- "jewellery" should be "jewelry" in both instances
Heading "Ettiquette" should be "Etiquette"

Page Url: planetzar.com/prov-balada.html

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Heading "Captial City" should be "Capital"
Under "Akouta Deadlands", 1st par- "traveller" should be "traveler"; 4th par- "traveller" should be "traveler"
Under Enazab-Kaa, 2nd par- "travellers" should be "travelers"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: You have both "Enesians" and "Eneisians" all over - not sure which is correct
Heading "Ettiquette" should be "Etiquette"

Page Url: planetzar.com/prov-eneis.html

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under The Human Refuge, "maintaned" should be "maintained"
Under Angun, should "outport" be "outpost"?
Under Jaemicas Oasis, "traveller" should be "traveler"
Under The Dunes of Agorcana, "traveller" should be "traveler"
Under Beronar's Path, "traveller" should be "traveler" in 1st and 2nd pars many places

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Heading "Ettiquette" should be "Etiquette"

Page Url: planetzar.com/prov-orhon.html

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Overview, 2nd par- "scavange" should be "scavenge"
Under Orho Badlands, "Afterwhich Orhon" that sentence is kind of weird

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