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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Minor Element: Wood", 2nd par- need a space between "dwarfism),and"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Growth and Reproduction", 2nd par- "minomer" should be "misnomer"
3rd par- "The rely" should be "They rely"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Artifacts", 1st par- "The gene for artifacts are recessive" should be either "is" or "genes"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: "molluscs" shouls be "mollusks" in both title and first word of par

Page Url: planetzar.com/lc-ss

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Prestige Levels & Benefits", Low-Life, "onth" should be "month"
Noteworthy, should be a space in "life(maybe"
Legendary, "world-renown hero" should be "world-renowned hero"; "know when you're coming" should be "knows when you're coming"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: "Scorpian" should be "Scorpion" in both instances

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: At the top, "List;" should have a colon, not a semi-colon
Under "Cannibal", "occassional" should be "occasional"
Under "Decimation", "a few section" should be "a few sections"
Under "Drowned", "shrivelled" should be "shriveled"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: At the top, "List;" should have a colon, not a semi-colon
Under "Desert", "withundersides" should be "with undersides"
Under "Volcano", "The appear" should be "They appear"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: At the top, "List;" should have a colon, not a semi-colon
Under "Incense", the phrase "The scents given off by incense types are always calming and gives" should have "give" instead
Under "Miracle", "jewellery" should be "jewelry"
Under "Tithe", "jewellery" should be "jewelry"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: 2nd par- "Their formidable looking" should be "They're"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: 2nd par- "a high black-market prices" should be "at"; "Who knows." should end in "?"

Page Url: planetzar.com/lc-human

[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Diet", "molluscs" should be "mollusks"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Reproduction", 2nd par, "Once the pair have mated" should be "has mated"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Diet", "mulluscs" should be "mollusks"

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[Jenn]

Name: Jenn
Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473

Error: Under "Running Away", 1st par- "to to make it tame" should only have one "to"
2nd par- "particularily" should be "particularly"
Under "Chances of Running Away", 10%, "prior ro" should be "prior to"

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