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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:12:05 GMT -7
Name: Jenn Player Thread: euclidestheatre.proboards.com/ind....lay&thread=1473Error: Under "Government", "judgement" should be "judgment" Under "Art", 1st par- "common in this figures" - should that be "this province"?; 2nd par- "Their painting resemble" should be "paintings" Under "Architecture", 2nd par- "chiselled" should be "chiseled"; 4th par- "and is an immediate indication" should be "and are immediate indications" (also "Sultheren" should have "m"); 6th par also needs "m" Under "Clothing and Decoration", 1st par, needs "m", "jewellery" should be "jewelry"; 2nd par needs "m", "Both men and women where" should be "wear" Heading "Ettiquette" should be "Etiquette" Page Url: planetzar.com/prov-sultherem.html
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:13:32 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:14:40 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:15:28 GMT -7
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iprince
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Post by iprince on Jan 29, 2011 12:16:30 GMT -7
Jenn, you've given me a heartattack. D=
But thank-you, thank-you, thank-you. I know what I'm doing today! C:
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:17:00 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:18:32 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 12:45:07 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 29, 2011 14:02:48 GMT -7
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Post by iprince on Jan 29, 2011 19:13:54 GMT -7
All edits up to this point are complete[/u]
Jenn: Just tallied up the proper amount of PP for all your beta-helpings. C:
PG.1 (16) + PG.2 (27) + PG.3 (24) + PG.4 (13) = 80. (This wasn't counting the ones I edited with "fixed.)
A couple notes, just for clarification:
- I only gave you one point for the "list;" and "ettiquette" errors, because they were in the same place on each page.
- "Storeys" is actually correct, it's just the British spelling of the world. C: I'm pretty sure I stuck to British spellings throughout the website (colour, gray, and so forth), as I am Canadian, and this is the norm for me.
- Sultheren is also correct, although I didn't check through the whole page to see if I used it properly. "Sultheren" is the nationality (like Canadian, American, or Eneisian), where as "Sultherem" is the place. So, you could say: I was born in Sultherem, therefore I am a Sultheren.
I noticed a few people with a bit of confusion in regards to the nationality names, so I'll add it into each province page. For reference:
Anygh: Anyghian
Balada: Baladian
Eneis: Eneisian
Orhon: xx
Sultherem: Sultheren
Terra: Terren
Turacha: Turachian
Thanks so much, Jenn. You are a huge help to me.
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Post by Spiderfly on Jan 29, 2011 19:52:38 GMT -7
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Post by iprince on Jan 29, 2011 19:56:57 GMT -7
My family are Newfies, but I was born in Ontario, and raised in Alberta. I lived in NFLD for a couple years, but I consider Alberta my home.
C: And the boyfriend and I are also looking at property in BC!
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Post by Spiderfly on Jan 29, 2011 20:10:35 GMT -7
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Post by Jenn on Jan 30, 2011 9:31:16 GMT -7
That is a big, beautiful total.  Thank you. I'd ignored all the "ou" in colour and favourite and whatnot, but I hadn't realized that "storeys" followed that format as well! The more you know, right? :3 And aaaah, the nationality distinction makes sense. Is there anywhere you can put up that list, like below the pronunciation of each provice on the pages? |
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Post by Jenn on Jan 30, 2011 13:34:14 GMT -7
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Thank you.